2008年2月4日月曜日

Kumamoto essey

http://docs.google.com/Presentation?id=df3qkrtt_6f97mgsgm#

2008年1月30日水曜日

Final WEI

6.0. Suggestions for your peers and successors

  • I can suggest “Yuka’s blog”. There are many attractions in her room. For example, links are very much!! Game, video bar and photo are characteristic. I want her teach me how to do that and make my room like her. Her blogs have pictures each other, and face images (ex. (-. -),(^ω^)v ) are very cute and we can see her tension.

Final WEI

5.0. Additional reflections on your blog writing

  • I want to write blogs everyday and have comments more. I want to make link of you tube like my class mates. They are very good!! Moreover I thought characters’ color changing was important in my blog. I want to try making my room more fashionable and easy reading. If I am in trouble, I will ask my mother how to do that. There are many things I have to learn.

Final WEI ~books~

3.0. Book Reviews


Short titles
with links

Dates (yy.mm.dd)

Words

Comments

Example:

Vampire Killer

07.05.16

39

1

2-01

A LITTLE PRINCESS

07.10.10

144

0

2-02

Remember Miranda

07.10.10

166

0

2-03

ALICE

07.10.17

98

0

2-04

THE WHITE STONES

07.10.23

96

0

2-05

A New Zealand ADVENTURE

07.10.31

123

0

2-06

Around the World in Eighty Days

07.11.07

109

0

2-07

London

07.11.14

106

0

2-08

American life

07.11.21

86

0

2-09

twisters

07.11.28

61

0

2-10

I want to be a Gymnast

07.12.05

62

0

2-11

Bradpitt

07.12.12

59

0

2-12

Starry Sky

07.12.18

70

0

2-13

California

08.01.09

99

0

2-14





2-15





2-16





2-17





2-18















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TOTALS:

1279

0

Note: Please calculate book review words and comments totals without the example (above).

4.2. Best Book Review

Selection and Assessment: Which of those book reviews do you feel is the best that you've written this semester, and why? Please remember that a complete answer is better than a short answer, and give at least two reasons to support your assessment.

l My best book review is “American life”. America is a longing country. I have never been there, so I really want to go there and enjoy their life style. I can see American life in this book. The scale is very big. They look happy and free. It is very important to live there. I can study American culture in this book and enjoy their life in the U.S.A.

Final WEI ~comments~

2.0. Comments

Total number of comments (use dashboard)

Months

08

09

10

11

12

01

Total


0

0

1

2

4

2

11

Most comments on:

Titles of posts with link

Dates of posts (yy.mm.dd)

Qualities of comments*[*]

Any one of your movie reviews

here

08.01.16


When did you respond to those comments?

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08.01.29

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How did you respond to those comments?

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By mouth

Any of your other posts*

here

08.01.16


When did you respond to those comments?

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08.01.29

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How did you respond to those comments?

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By mouth

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* Current semester comments on essays and other posts
** Please list the most important qualities of comments on each type of blog post.

Recent comments display

Does your blog display recent comments from blog visitors in a prominent location, for example in a sidebar, header, or footer widget? Where or why not?

  • Yes, it does. 5 recent comments are in a sidebar.

Additional reflections on comments

l I was happy when I got each comment. So I like to write some comments on my friends’ blogs. I could enjoy writing and reading comments on my blog. I had written comments more.

Final WEI ~movie~

1.0. Movie Reviews

1.1. Showcase

[+ links]

Dates on blog
(yy.mm.dd)

W

Notes

Toy Story

2007.10.16

5

260

Very good

Kill Bill

2007.10.19

4

340

I could write a best essay.

Romeo and Juliet

2007.11.28

5

442

I enjoyed writing this essay.

Mrs Doubtfire

2007.11028

5

441

I could tell about this movie.

School of Rock/Forrest Gump

2008.1.16

4

404

So good

Lilo & Stich/Shrek

2008.1.16

5

350

Pretty

Totals

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1296

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Key:

¶: number of paragraphs three or more sentences in length

W: number of words

1.2. Best Movie Review

Selection and Assessment: Which of those movie reviews do you feel is the best that you've written this semester, and why? Please remember that a complete answer is better than a short answer, and give at least two reasons to support your assessment.

My best movie review is “Mrs Doubtfire”. I could enjoy watching this movie and I remember the story until now. I like comedy so I laughed very much. Moreover I like a father like him. He is very kind to his family and always thinks them. He tries to keep touching with them. This story is very good. I am glad to meet the movie.

Final WEI ~overview~

0.0. Overview

Reviews, Posts, and Words


Months

08

09

10

11

12

01

Totals

Book reviews

0

0

5

4

3

1

13

Blog posts

0

0

20

18

23

10

71

Words

0

0

4848

2675

1158

1324

10005

TOTAL

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