2008年2月4日月曜日

Kumamoto essey

http://docs.google.com/Presentation?id=df3qkrtt_6f97mgsgm#

2008年1月30日水曜日

Final WEI

6.0. Suggestions for your peers and successors

  • I can suggest “Yuka’s blog”. There are many attractions in her room. For example, links are very much!! Game, video bar and photo are characteristic. I want her teach me how to do that and make my room like her. Her blogs have pictures each other, and face images (ex. (-. -),(^ω^)v ) are very cute and we can see her tension.

Final WEI

5.0. Additional reflections on your blog writing

  • I want to write blogs everyday and have comments more. I want to make link of you tube like my class mates. They are very good!! Moreover I thought characters’ color changing was important in my blog. I want to try making my room more fashionable and easy reading. If I am in trouble, I will ask my mother how to do that. There are many things I have to learn.

Final WEI ~books~

3.0. Book Reviews


Short titles
with links

Dates (yy.mm.dd)

Words

Comments

Example:

Vampire Killer

07.05.16

39

1

2-01

A LITTLE PRINCESS

07.10.10

144

0

2-02

Remember Miranda

07.10.10

166

0

2-03

ALICE

07.10.17

98

0

2-04

THE WHITE STONES

07.10.23

96

0

2-05

A New Zealand ADVENTURE

07.10.31

123

0

2-06

Around the World in Eighty Days

07.11.07

109

0

2-07

London

07.11.14

106

0

2-08

American life

07.11.21

86

0

2-09

twisters

07.11.28

61

0

2-10

I want to be a Gymnast

07.12.05

62

0

2-11

Bradpitt

07.12.12

59

0

2-12

Starry Sky

07.12.18

70

0

2-13

California

08.01.09

99

0

2-14





2-15





2-16





2-17





2-18















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TOTALS:

1279

0

Note: Please calculate book review words and comments totals without the example (above).

4.2. Best Book Review

Selection and Assessment: Which of those book reviews do you feel is the best that you've written this semester, and why? Please remember that a complete answer is better than a short answer, and give at least two reasons to support your assessment.

l My best book review is “American life”. America is a longing country. I have never been there, so I really want to go there and enjoy their life style. I can see American life in this book. The scale is very big. They look happy and free. It is very important to live there. I can study American culture in this book and enjoy their life in the U.S.A.

Final WEI ~comments~

2.0. Comments

Total number of comments (use dashboard)

Months

08

09

10

11

12

01

Total


0

0

1

2

4

2

11

Most comments on:

Titles of posts with link

Dates of posts (yy.mm.dd)

Qualities of comments*[*]

Any one of your movie reviews

here

08.01.16


When did you respond to those comments?

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08.01.29

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How did you respond to those comments?

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By mouth

Any of your other posts*

here

08.01.16


When did you respond to those comments?

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08.01.29

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How did you respond to those comments?

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By mouth

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* Current semester comments on essays and other posts
** Please list the most important qualities of comments on each type of blog post.

Recent comments display

Does your blog display recent comments from blog visitors in a prominent location, for example in a sidebar, header, or footer widget? Where or why not?

  • Yes, it does. 5 recent comments are in a sidebar.

Additional reflections on comments

l I was happy when I got each comment. So I like to write some comments on my friends’ blogs. I could enjoy writing and reading comments on my blog. I had written comments more.

Final WEI ~movie~

1.0. Movie Reviews

1.1. Showcase

[+ links]

Dates on blog
(yy.mm.dd)

W

Notes

Toy Story

2007.10.16

5

260

Very good

Kill Bill

2007.10.19

4

340

I could write a best essay.

Romeo and Juliet

2007.11.28

5

442

I enjoyed writing this essay.

Mrs Doubtfire

2007.11028

5

441

I could tell about this movie.

School of Rock/Forrest Gump

2008.1.16

4

404

So good

Lilo & Stich/Shrek

2008.1.16

5

350

Pretty

Totals

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14

1296

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Key:

¶: number of paragraphs three or more sentences in length

W: number of words

1.2. Best Movie Review

Selection and Assessment: Which of those movie reviews do you feel is the best that you've written this semester, and why? Please remember that a complete answer is better than a short answer, and give at least two reasons to support your assessment.

My best movie review is “Mrs Doubtfire”. I could enjoy watching this movie and I remember the story until now. I like comedy so I laughed very much. Moreover I like a father like him. He is very kind to his family and always thinks them. He tries to keep touching with them. This story is very good. I am glad to meet the movie.

Final WEI ~overview~

0.0. Overview

Reviews, Posts, and Words


Months

08

09

10

11

12

01

Totals

Book reviews

0

0

5

4

3

1

13

Blog posts

0

0

20

18

23

10

71

Words

0

0

4848

2675

1158

1324

10005

TOTAL

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money box(’ω`*)

Do you know what is this??

It is very funny goods.

When I put money into his mouth, he laughs.

It is very interesting for me to save money.

It is a good idea!!!!

I want to get this item.

2008年1月29日火曜日

UME


Ume (Japanese apricot) flowers are about to blossom.
there are two color, white like this and red in Japan.
It anounces us coming spring in Japan.
I like spring, becaouse there are many flowers around many places. however, I don't want to get spring in this year, because...
because spring is a parting season.

2008年1月16日水曜日

Coming of Age Day

On January, 14, 2008, I had a “Coming of Age Day” in Kumamoto Japan. In Japan, people whose age is 20 years old have a festival in winter. They are regarded adult in Japan. We wear kimono and attend a ceremony.
In this year, I became 20 years old, so I had the ceremony. After that, my boy friend gave me this bouquest!!!!!!!! I was very surprised!! I have yearned for it for a long time. Pink is my favorite color, he knows. He is the best my partner.:):):)♪♪♪

Origami

Origami is the Japanese art of folding paper to make attractive objects. Do you know it?? Moreover “crane” is the most favorite figure!!! Almost Japanese can make it.
This picture is made by Ichan. He is very clever. It is very small!!!!! I cannot make it like him:(

Essay 6


Essay 6 Lolo & Stitch


I am going to write about a movie, “Lilo & Stitch”. I have seen it once before, so it is twice for me. I like this movie character Stitch. In Japan, we can buy Stitch goods. There are many kinds of goods. Stitich is very famous in Japan.


First, I am going to introduce this story. There are a girl and her sister. They are too poor, so they were coming to a head to live separately. Then Stitch came to earth from a planet. First, he was violence very much. He broke many goods, so an old sister didn’t like him. However he changed his behave and thinking gradually.


Next, I am going to introduce characters in this movie. First, I will talk about stitch. His body is blue. He is not good at water because he sinks in water. He can speak. Next, Lilo is a girl. She doesn’t have friends because she roughhouses. She feels lonely, so she wants someone to talk with her. Next, Nina is a Lilo’s sister, she takes care her younger sister. She wants to live with her, but she doesn’t have work and is not good at taking care her. Next, Kobra is a welfare worker. He checks Nina’s house. He is a good man. Next, Janba is a Nina’s friend. Maybe he loves Nina I think. He looked for a job for Nina, so he is a good man.


Third, I want to write about my favorite character, Stitch. He is so cute!! For example, He can be a record player. He put his nail on a record, open his mouth and we can listen to music from there. Moreover, he became to be gentle. When Lilo was carried off by alien, he went to her to pick up her. When Stitch went back to his planet, he said thank to Lilo and other people. Finally, Stitch’s final greeting was so impression.

Finally, we can appreciate an importance of family and friends. “Ohana” means family in Hawaii. In this movie, Ohana is a keyword I think. We hope to pressure “Oahana”.

Essay 5


Essay 5 ~School of Rock~


I am going to write about a movie, “School of Rock”. I watched it yesterday. It is the first time to watch it. I had not heard this movie title, and I wasn’t interested in Rock. However, it was really fun.


First, I am going to introduce this story. There is a man. He loves Rock very much. However, he was quitted by his Rock band which he made. He wanted to Rock. Then, he caught a call. He got his work. He became a teacher at high level school. First of all, He didn’t teach students and slept in classes. However, he started to teach Rock. There were some problems, but finally they were succeeded.


Next, I am going to introduce characters in this movie. A main character is Dui. He is a fat and old man. I think he is not handsome. Anyway, he can’t live without Rock. Next, Rose is a principal of the school. She is slim and strict. She wears glasses. She always thinks her school on pressure, but in fact, she want to enjoy her school life and doesn’t like her how to teach them.   She was a unique woman in past. Next, Lorene is a piano player. He looks a Japanese and serious. Freddy is drummer. He looks cool and he is a main student in the class. Tomica is a chorus. She doesn’t have confidence in her fat body. So she said she couldn’t sing on a stage, but Dui made her trust herself. Her song is very nice.

  Next, I am going to introduce my favorite character, Dui, of course. I think his ideas are unbelievable. He changed the students’ schedules all Rock and he made them students like Rock. It was very splendid. Moreover, his words, “Let’s Rock!!” was very impressive. He uses “rock” as verb. It tells me he really loves Rock. In addition, he changed a rule in the school. When curators knew a Dui was false, everyone was angly with him and school. However, the students came to Dui’s house and make him woke up and had rock stage. The curators and principal went to see the stage and enjoyed the concert. Everyone was happy. The concert was succeeded. I like the ending!! Dui talks to us in the movie!! I watched like this for the first time, it was very fun and unique!! I think you can enjoy this movie.

2008年1月12日土曜日

Chinese fried rise

Last night, I cooked them, Chinese fried rise and potato gratin. I had made them for the first time. I could get the recipe on the inter net. At that time, I really wanted cooking and eating them. I cooked them in my boy friend’s house. We enjoyed cooking time.
After 90 minutes cooking, we ate them!! IT WAS VERY DELICIOUS☆★ I can recommend them everyone. If you get the recipe, please let me know. I was very happy:)

2008年1月10日木曜日

SHUSI

Sushi Bar.
You know Sushi, don’t you?
It is a type of Japanese food consisting of pieces of raw fish eaten with cooked rice. It very famous all over the world.
I really love eating them. I went to a Shusi Bar with my family. These shusi were very delicious and I was really happy. I want to go there many times.

2008年1月9日水曜日

Osechi


Do you know Osechi?? It is one of Japanese foods. We eat in New Year’s Day.
My grandmother made it in this year. It was so delicious, I like it.
Thank you my lovely grandmother.

snow man


When I went to Aso with my family, it was snow there!! I really like snow, so I was very excited!! I made him in a restaurant. I left him there, but I hope he lives there now. I really love him.

book review 2-13


California
Everyone has heard of Alcatraz and the golden gate bridge. Everyone has seen films from Hollywood. But what ease do we know about California?
This book looks at the cities and the mountains, at the sea and the deserts. It looks at the history of this exciting state, at the gold miners of 1849 and at san Francisco and its earthquakes.

I have never been there before, but I could learn about California. There are many beautiful places and natures. I want to go there because reading it. Then I want to get GOLD!!!!!! Shall we go there??